I just wanted to say that this was really well written. I was immediately hooked into the story. The video game elements were woven in nicely and didn't feel at all forced. I especially liked allusions to Kirby being a cannibal and 'dancing around your skin' that just works on so many levels. Ha ha, pun intended. You guys probably have enough technical help, but if you ever want another writer on staff (for low low price of nothing) hit me up. I'm studying pretty much anything with 'Writing' in the course title at the University of West Florida (Pensacola, FL) but I'd love to shot you an idea or two or even contribute on a regular basis.
- Riff Raff
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I don't really think they're looking for writers right now. But hey, these guys obviously read these forums. Maybe they'll pick up on a few of the ideas we toss around. Who knows.
- Guardian of the Kingdom
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lol amazing, simply amazingGorblax wrote:Girls? On the internet? Impossible. Or at least highly unlikely.
although im am not studying to be a writer of anykind... i find this story to be anything short of incredible and wish i could help out in anyway possible my knowledge of smash/nintendo related stuff is pretty vast >_<
i was thinking that when peach leaves the asylum that she could pass by zelda/sheik in a straght jacket due to her split personalities >_< well unless she has another role already
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